Very Good, but can be better.
I like your classical style mixed with movie and chinese feel toward the middle. The town (if you have seen this movie) has the same sound in their soundtrack as you do. It sound extremely professional as if in a recording studio and I respect that. I was just wondering what software are you using and is there a mac version. I also make music but I have no idea how to make it sound like a recoding studio. I really love what you do I have many of your songs. I am a cello player so I was thinks of adding either a better background bass and cello part or putting a violin solo. Either or both of those would make the song sound like an actual orchestra and give a more intensifying feel. Out of all of this I hope you take that your song is great but there is always room for improvement. I love your songs and keep going like this. I hope one day you and I can work together on something. Great job.
Also I am only giving this a ten because your original idea was great and was fun to listen to. Keep going.
P.S.: I am not sure whether this could help you because I don;t know what your were trying to go for, but I hope it helps.I know its for a game but I don;t know where in a game. Besides all of the bad comments, you did a great job. Great work you got here.